diff --git a/lms/static/js/spec/verify_student/webcam_photo_view_spec.js b/lms/static/js/spec/verify_student/webcam_photo_view_spec.js index 5f4d4a99f5..9a4fc13c71 100644 --- a/lms/static/js/spec/verify_student/webcam_photo_view_spec.js +++ b/lms/static/js/spec/verify_student/webcam_photo_view_spec.js @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ define([ view = createView( backends ); // Expect an error - expect( view.errorModel.get( 'errorTitle' ) ).toEqual( 'No Flash Detected' ); + expect( view.errorModel.get( 'errorTitle' ) ).toEqual( 'Flash Not Detected' ); expect( view.errorModel.get( 'errorMsg' ) ).toContain( 'Get Flash' ); expect( view.errorModel.get( 'shown' ) ).toBe( true ); diff --git a/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/make_payment_step_view.js b/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/make_payment_step_view.js index 225d2e6e93..a0ffd1d79b 100644 --- a/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/make_payment_step_view.js +++ b/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/make_payment_step_view.js @@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ var edx = edx || {}; }, handleCreateOrderError: function( xhr ) { - var errorMsg = gettext( 'An unexpected error occurred. Please try again.' ); + var errorMsg = gettext( 'An error has occurred. Please try again.' ); if ( xhr.status === 400 ) { errorMsg = xhr.responseText; diff --git a/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/review_photos_step_view.js b/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/review_photos_step_view.js index fbe5067b99..ed76ea27d0 100644 --- a/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/review_photos_step_view.js +++ b/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/review_photos_step_view.js @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ var edx = edx || {}; }, handleSubmissionError: function( xhr ) { - var errorMsg = gettext( 'An unexpected error occurred. Please try again later.' ); + var errorMsg = gettext( 'An error has occurred. Please try again later.' ); // Re-enable the submit button to allow the user to retry this.setSubmitButtonEnabled( true ); diff --git a/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/step_view.js b/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/step_view.js index 794726a672..96ad8c2d4f 100644 --- a/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/step_view.js +++ b/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/step_view.js @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ handleError: function( errorTitle, errorMsg ) { this.errorModel.set({ errorTitle: errorTitle || gettext( "Error" ), - errorMsg: errorMsg || gettext( "An unexpected error occurred. Please reload the page to try again." ), + errorMsg: errorMsg || gettext( "An error has occurred. Please try reloading the page." ), shown: true }); }, diff --git a/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/webcam_photo_view.js b/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/webcam_photo_view.js index 13e57dc44d..954729678f 100644 --- a/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/webcam_photo_view.js +++ b/lms/static/js/verify_student/views/webcam_photo_view.js @@ -85,8 +85,8 @@ handleVideoFailure: function() { this.trigger( 'error', - gettext( 'Video capture error' ), - gettext( 'Please check that your webcam is connected and you have allowed access to your webcam.' ) + gettext( 'Video Capture Error' ), + gettext( 'Please verify that your webcam is connected and that you have allowed your browser to access it.' ) ); } }, @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ if ( !this.backend ) { this.handleError( - gettext( "No Flash Detected" ), + gettext( "Flash Not Detected" ), gettext( "You don't seem to have Flash installed." ) + " " + _.sprintf( gettext( "%(a_start)s Get Flash %(a_end)s to continue your enrollment." ), diff --git a/lms/templates/verify_student/enrollment_confirmation_step.underscore b/lms/templates/verify_student/enrollment_confirmation_step.underscore index b0d2de9d96..55d26ed69a 100644 --- a/lms/templates/verify_student/enrollment_confirmation_step.underscore +++ b/lms/templates/verify_student/enrollment_confirmation_step.underscore @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@

<%- gettext( "Verified Status" ) %>

- <%- gettext( "Thank you for submitting your identification photos, we will review them soon. If there is a problem with any of the items, we will contact you to resubmit. You can now enroll in any of the verified certificate courses for one year without having to re-verify." ) %>

+ <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "Thank you for submitting your photos. We will review them shortly. You can now sign up for any %(platformName)s course that offers verified certificates. Verification is good for one year. After one year, you must submit photos for verification again." ), { platformName: platformName } ) %>

diff --git a/lms/templates/verify_student/face_photo_step.underscore b/lms/templates/verify_student/face_photo_step.underscore index 4d3a626609..57d9950a1b 100644 --- a/lms/templates/verify_student/face_photo_step.underscore +++ b/lms/templates/verify_student/face_photo_step.underscore @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@

<%- gettext( "Take Your Photo" ) %>

-

<%- gettext( "Use your webcam to take a picture of your face so we can match it with the picture on your ID." ) %>

+

<%- gettext( "Use your webcam to take a photo of your face. We will match this photo with the photo on your ID." ) %>

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
  • <%- gettext( "Make sure your face is well-lit" ) %>
  • <%- gettext( "Be sure your entire face is inside the frame" ) %>
  • - <%= _.sprintf( gettext( "Once in position, use the camera button %(icon)s to capture your picture" ), { icon: '()' } ) %> + <%= _.sprintf( gettext( "Once in position, use the camera button %(icon)s to capture your photo" ), { icon: '()' } ) %>
  • <%- gettext( "Can we match the photo you took with the one on your ID?" ) %>
  • <%- gettext( "Use the retake photo button if you are not pleased with your photo" ) %>
    • @@ -26,17 +26,17 @@
    -

    <%- gettext( "Common Questions" ) %>

    +

    <%- gettext( "Frequently Asked Questions" ) %>

    <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "Why does %(platformName)s need my photo?" ), { platformName: platformName } ) %>
    -
    <%- gettext( "As part of the verification process, we need your photo to confirm your identity." ) %>
    +
    <%- gettext( "As part of the verification process, you take a photo of both your face and a government-issued photo ID. Our authorization service confirms your identity by comparing the photo you take with the photo on your ID." ) %>
    - <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "What does %(platformName)s do with this picture?" ), { platformName: platformName } ) %> + <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "What does %(platformName)s do with this photo?" ), { platformName: platformName } ) %>
    -
    <%- gettext( "We encrypt it and send it to our secure authorization service for review. We use the highest levels of security and do not save the photo or information anywhere once the match has been completed." ) %>
    +
    <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "We use the highest levels of security available to encrypt your photo and send it to our authorization service for review. Your photo and information are not saved or visible anywhere on %(platformName)s after the verification process is complete." ), { platformName: platformName } ) %>
    diff --git a/lms/templates/verify_student/id_photo_step.underscore b/lms/templates/verify_student/id_photo_step.underscore index 22ef73bff6..265bac5abf 100644 --- a/lms/templates/verify_student/id_photo_step.underscore +++ b/lms/templates/verify_student/id_photo_step.underscore @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@

    <%- gettext( "Take a Photo of Your ID" ) %>

    -

    <%- gettext("Use your webcam to take a picture of your ID so we can match it with your photo and the name on your account.") %>

    +

    <%- gettext("Use your webcam to take a photo of your ID. We will match this photo with the photo of your face and the name on your account.") %>

    @@ -27,19 +27,19 @@
    -

    <%- gettext( "Common Questions" ) %>

    +

    <%- gettext( "Frequently Asked Questions" ) %>

    <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "Why does %(platformName)s need my photo?" ), { platformName: platformName } ) %>
    -
    <%- gettext( "We need to match your ID with your photo and name to confirm your identity." ) %>
    +
    <%- gettext( "As part of the verification process, you take a photo of both your face and a government-issued photo ID. Our authorization service confirms your identity by comparing the photo you take with the photo on your ID." ) %>
    - <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "What does %(platformName)s do with this picture?" ), { platformName: platformName } ) %> + <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "What does %(platformName)s do with this photo?" ), { platformName: platformName } ) %>
    -
    <%- gettext( "We encrypt it and send it to our secure authorization service for review. We use the highest levels of security and do not save the photo or information anywhere once the match has been completed." ) %>
    +
    <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "We use the highest levels of security available to encrypt your photo and send it to our authorization service for review. Your photo and information are not saved or visible anywhere on %(platformName)s after the verification process is complete." ), { platformName: platformName } ) %>
    diff --git a/lms/templates/verify_student/intro_step.underscore b/lms/templates/verify_student/intro_step.underscore index 2d467deb84..fc235907e6 100644 --- a/lms/templates/verify_student/intro_step.underscore +++ b/lms/templates/verify_student/intro_step.underscore @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@

    - <%- gettext( "Check your email" ) %> + <%- gettext( "Check Your Email" ) %>

    @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@

    - <%- gettext( "A driver's license, passport, or government-issued ID with your name and picture" ) %> + <%- gettext( "A driver's license, passport, or other government-issued ID with your name and photo" ) %>

    diff --git a/lms/templates/verify_student/make_payment_step.underscore b/lms/templates/verify_student/make_payment_step.underscore index 389436b232..37166b729f 100644 --- a/lms/templates/verify_student/make_payment_step.underscore +++ b/lms/templates/verify_student/make_payment_step.underscore @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ) %>
    - <%- gettext( "We've already verified your identity through the photos of you and your ID you provided earlier. You can now pay and complete registration." ) %> + <%- gettext( "We have successfully verified your identity. You can now enter your payment information and complete your enrollment." ) %>
    <% } %> @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ <% } else {%>
  • -

    <%- gettext( "Your Course Total" ) %>

    +

    <%- gettext( "Your Total Contribution" ) %>

    <%- gettext( "To complete your enrollment, you will need to pay:" ) %>

    @@ -126,14 +126,14 @@

    - <%- gettext( "Check your email" ) %> + <%- gettext( "Check Your Email" ) %>

    • <% } else {%> <% if ( requirements['photo-id-required'] ) { %>
  • -

    <%- gettext( "Government-issued Photo ID" ) %>

    +

    <%- gettext( "Government-Issued Photo ID" ) %>

    diff --git a/lms/templates/verify_student/payment_confirmation_step.underscore b/lms/templates/verify_student/payment_confirmation_step.underscore index 45d98e5eef..780b715334 100644 --- a/lms/templates/verify_student/payment_confirmation_step.underscore +++ b/lms/templates/verify_student/payment_confirmation_step.underscore @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@

    - <%= _.sprintf( gettext( "Thank you! We have received your payment for %(courseName)s" ), { courseName: '' + courseName + '' } ) %> + <%= _.sprintf( gettext( "Thank you! We have received your payment for %(courseName)s." ), { courseName: '' + courseName + '' } ) %>

    <% if ( receipt ) { %> @@ -55,14 +55,14 @@

    <%- gettext( "Please Note" ) %>:

    -

    <%- gettext( "Items with strikethough have been refunded." ) %>

    +

    <%- gettext( "Crossed out items have been refunded." ) %>

    <% } %>
    -

    <%- gettext( "Billed To" ) %>: +

    <%- gettext( "Billed to" ) %>: <%- receipt.billedTo.firstName %> <%- receipt.billedTo.lastName %> (<%- receipt.billedTo.city %>, @@ -74,7 +74,7 @@

    • <% } else { %> -

    <%- gettext( "No receipt available." ) %>

    +

    <%- gettext( "No receipt available" ) %>

    <% } %> <% if ( nextStepTitle ) { %> @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@

    - <%- gettext( "A driver's license, passport, or government-issued ID with your name and picture." ) %> + <%- gettext( "A driver's license, passport, or government-issued ID with your name and photo." ) %>

    @@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ ) %> - diff --git a/lms/templates/verify_student/review_photos_step.underscore b/lms/templates/verify_student/review_photos_step.underscore index 087de85b4d..f2e24d4651 100644 --- a/lms/templates/verify_student/review_photos_step.underscore +++ b/lms/templates/verify_student/review_photos_step.underscore @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
    -

    <%- gettext( "Review your photos" ) %>

    +

    <%- gettext( "Review Your Photos" ) %>

    -

    <%- gettext( "Make sure we can verify your identity from the photos below." ) %>

    +

    <%- gettext( "Make sure we can verify your identity with the photos and information you have provided." ) %>

    @@ -30,11 +30,11 @@
  • <%- _.sprintf( gettext( "Does the name on your ID match your account name: %(fullName)s?" ), { fullName: fullName } ) %> @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@

    <%- gettext( "Photos don't meet the requirements?" ) %> - <%- gettext( "Retake your photos" ) %> + <%- gettext( "Retake Your Photos" ) %>

    • diff --git a/lms/templates/verify_student/webcam_photo.underscore b/lms/templates/verify_student/webcam_photo.underscore index cdaaffdbc0..47fa3bebdb 100644 --- a/lms/templates/verify_student/webcam_photo.underscore +++ b/lms/templates/verify_student/webcam_photo.underscore @@ -9,11 +9,11 @@