diff --git a/lms/djangoapps/certificates/views/webview.py b/lms/djangoapps/certificates/views/webview.py index 4911dcc64c..95a70ead7f 100644 --- a/lms/djangoapps/certificates/views/webview.py +++ b/lms/djangoapps/certificates/views/webview.py @@ -54,24 +54,24 @@ def get_certificate_description(mode, certificate_type, platform_name): certificate_type_description = None if mode == 'honor': # Translators: This text describes the 'Honor' course certificate type. - certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} certificate signifies that a " - "learner has agreed to abide by the honor code established by {platform_name} " - "and has completed all of the required tasks for this course under its " + certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} Certificate signifies that an {platform_name} " + "learner has agreed to abide by {platform_name}'s honor code and " + "completed all of the required tasks for this course under its " "guidelines.").format(cert_type=certificate_type, platform_name=platform_name) elif mode == 'verified': # Translators: This text describes the 'ID Verified' course certificate type, which is a higher level of # verification offered by edX. This type of verification is useful for professional education/certifications - certificate_type_description = _("A {cert_type} certificate signifies that a " - "learner has agreed to abide by the honor code established by {platform_name} " - "and has completed all of the required tasks for this course under its " - "guidelines. A {cert_type} certificate also indicates that the identity of the " - "learner has been checked and is valid.").format(cert_type=certificate_type, + certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} Certificate signifies that an {platform_name} " + "learner has agreed to abide by {platform_name}'s honor code and " + "completed all of the required tasks for this course under its " + "guidelines, as well as having their photo ID checked to verify " + "their identity.").format(cert_type=certificate_type, platform_name=platform_name) elif mode == 'xseries': # Translators: This text describes the 'XSeries' course certificate type. An XSeries is a collection of # courses related to each other in a meaningful way, such as a specific topic or theme, or even an organization - certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} certificate demonstrates a high level of " + certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} Certificate demonstrates a high level of " "achievement in a program of study, and includes verification of " "the student's identity.").format(cert_type=certificate_type) return certificate_type_description @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ def _update_certificate_context(context, user_certificate, platform_name): # Translators: This text fragment appears after the student's name (displayed in a large font) on the certificate # screen. The text describes the accomplishment represented by the certificate information displayed to the user context['accomplishment_copy_description_full'] = _("successfully completed, received a passing grade, and was " - "awarded this {platform_name} {certificate_type} " + "awarded a {platform_name} {certificate_type} " "Certificate of Completion in ").format( platform_name=platform_name, certificate_type=context.get("certificate_type")) @@ -129,8 +129,12 @@ def _update_certificate_context(context, user_certificate, platform_name): context['certificate_type_description'] = certificate_type_description # Translators: This text describes the purpose (and therefore, value) of a course certificate + # 'verifying your identity' refers to the process for establishing the authenticity of the student context['certificate_info_description'] = _("{platform_name} acknowledges achievements through certificates, which " - "are awarded for course activities that {platform_name} students complete.").format( + "are awarded for various activities {platform_name} students complete " + "under the {platform_name} Honor Code. Some " + "certificates require completing additional steps, such as " + " verifying your identity.").format( platform_name=platform_name, tos_url=context.get('company_tos_url'), verified_cert_url=context.get('company_verified_certificate_url')) @@ -197,7 +201,10 @@ def _update_context_with_basic_info(context, course_id, platform_name, configura context['certificate_verify_urltext'] = _("Validate this certificate for yourself") # Translators: This text describes (at a high level) the mission and charter the edX platform and organization - context['company_about_description'] = _("{platform_name} offers interactive online classes and MOOCs.").format( + context['company_about_description'] = _("{platform_name} offers interactive online classes and MOOCs from the " + "world's best universities, including MIT, Harvard, Berkeley, University " + "of Texas, and many others. {platform_name} is a non-profit online " + "initiative created by founding partners Harvard and MIT.").format( platform_name=platform_name) context['company_about_title'] = _("About {platform_name}").format(platform_name=platform_name) @@ -229,13 +236,15 @@ def _update_course_context(request, context, course, platform_name): if context['organization_long_name']: # Translators: This text represents the description of course context['accomplishment_copy_course_description'] = _('a course of study offered by {partner_short_name}, ' - 'an online learning initiative of {partner_long_name}.').format( + 'an online learning initiative of {partner_long_name} ' + 'through {platform_name}.').format( partner_short_name=context['organization_short_name'], partner_long_name=context['organization_long_name'], platform_name=platform_name) else: # Translators: This text represents the description of course - context['accomplishment_copy_course_description'] = _('a course of study offered by {partner_short_name}.').format( + context['accomplishment_copy_course_description'] = _('a course of study offered by {partner_short_name}, ' + 'through {platform_name}.').format( partner_short_name=context['organization_short_name'], platform_name=platform_name) @@ -257,7 +266,7 @@ def _update_social_context(request, context, course, user, user_certificate, pla context['twitter_share_enabled'] = share_settings.get('CERTIFICATE_TWITTER', False) context['twitter_share_text'] = share_settings.get( 'CERTIFICATE_TWITTER_TEXT', - _("I completed a course at {platform_name}. Take a look at my certificate.").format( + _("I completed a course on {platform_name}. Take a look at my certificate.").format( platform_name=platform_name ) ) @@ -303,13 +312,13 @@ def _update_context_with_user_info(context, user, user_certificate): user_name=user_fullname ) # Translators: This line is displayed to a user who has completed a course and achieved a certification - context['accomplishment_banner_opening'] = _("{fullname}, you earned a certificate!").format( + context['accomplishment_banner_opening'] = _("{fullname}, you've earned a certificate!").format( fullname=user_fullname ) # Translators: This line congratulates the user and instructs them to share their accomplishment on social networks - context['accomplishment_banner_congrats'] = _("Congratulations! This page summarizes what " - "you accomplished. Show it off to family, friends, and colleagues " + context['accomplishment_banner_congrats'] = _("Congratulations! This page summarizes all of the details of what " + "you've accomplished. Show it off to family, friends, and colleagues " "in your social and professional networks.") # Translators: This line leads the reader to understand more about the certificate that a student has been awarded