From 97bc71bd23511c1cf69e5bf1949ae0d84230acd5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mark Hoeber Date: Thu, 29 May 2014 15:44:59 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Welcome page text edits --- cms/templates/howitworks.html | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/cms/templates/howitworks.html b/cms/templates/howitworks.html index d74ccfb9e2..b01b90fdd1 100644 --- a/cms/templates/howitworks.html +++ b/cms/templates/howitworks.html @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
## "edX Studio" should not be translated

${_('Welcome to')}

-

${_("Studio helps manage your courses online, so you can focus on teaching them")}

+

${_("Studio helps manage your online courses, so you can focus on teaching them")}

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@

  • ${_("Change Your Mind Anytime")}

    -

    ${_("Draft your outline and build content anywhere. Simple drag and drop tools let your reorganize quickly.")}

    +

    ${_("Draft your outline and build content anywhere. Simple drag and drop tools let you reorganize quickly.")}

  • @@ -75,12 +75,12 @@

    ${_("Learning is More than Just Lectures")}

    -

    ${_("Studio lets you weave your content together in a way that reinforces learning — short video lectures interleaved with exercises and more. Insert videos and author a wide variety of exercise types with just a few clicks.")}

    +

    ${_("Studio lets you weave your content together in a way that reinforces learning. Insert videos, discussions, and a wide variety of exercises with just a few clicks.")}

    • ${_("Create Learning Pathways")}

      -

      ${_("Help your students understand a small interactive piece at a time with multimedia, HTML, and exercises.")}

      +

      ${_("Help your students understand one concept at a time with multimedia, HTML, and exercises.")}

    • @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@

    • ${_("A Broad Library of Problem Types")}

      -

      ${_("It's more than just multiple choice. Studio has nearly a dozen types of problems to challenge your learners.")}

      +

      ${_("It's more than just multiple choice. Studio supports more than a dozen types of problems to challenge your learners.")}

    @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@