From 5ca0ebcc56f988c712fe042cbaea27482317c4ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Simon Chen <schen@edx.org>
Date: Wed, 15 Feb 2017 12:51:17 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Update embargo message with better language ECOM-7119

---
 .../test-theme/lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html  | 6 +++---
 lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html                 | 6 +++---
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/common/test/test-theme/lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html b/common/test/test-theme/lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html
index 648d2b0729..284824fa20 100644
--- a/common/test/test-theme/lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html
+++ b/common/test/test-theme/lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html
@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ from openedx.core.djangolib.markup import HTML, Text
     <section class="outside-app">
     <p>
     ${Text(_("Our system indicates that you are trying to access this {platform_name} "
-        "course from a country or region currently subject to U.S. economic and trade "
-        "sanctions. Unfortunately, at this time {platform_name} must comply with "
-        "export controls, and we cannot allow you to access this course."
+        "course from a country or region currently subject to U.S. economic and trade sanctions." 
+        "Unfortunately, because {platform_name} is required to comply with export controls," 
+        "we cannot allow you to access this course at this time."
       )).format(
         platform_name=Text(settings.PLATFORM_NAME),
       )}
diff --git a/lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html b/lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html
index ac62f76edd..3ec78df2b3 100644
--- a/lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html
+++ b/lms/templates/static_templates/embargo.html
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ from openedx.core.djangolib.markup import HTML, Text
     <section class="outside-app">
     <p>
     ${Text(_("Our system indicates that you are trying to access this {platform_name} "
-        "course from a country or region currently subject to U.S. economic and trade "
-        "sanctions. Unfortunately, at this time {platform_name} must comply with "
-        "export controls, and we cannot allow you to access this course."
+        "course from a country or region currently subject to U.S. economic and trade sanctions." 
+        "Unfortunately, because {platform_name} is required to comply with export controls," 
+        "we cannot allow you to access this course at this time."
       )).format(
         platform_name=Text(settings.PLATFORM_NAME),
       )}