diff --git a/lms/djangoapps/courseware/views.py b/lms/djangoapps/courseware/views.py index 48e68a1338..040bdc420a 100644 --- a/lms/djangoapps/courseware/views.py +++ b/lms/djangoapps/courseware/views.py @@ -1418,10 +1418,10 @@ def render_xblock(request, usage_key_string, check_if_enrolled=True): # string identifying the name of this installation, such as "edX". FINANCIAL_ASSISTANCE_HEADER = _( '{platform_name} now offers financial assistance for learners who want to earn Verified Certificates but' - ' who may not be able to pay the Verified Certificate fee. Eligible learners receive 90{percent_sign} off' + ' who may not be able to pay the Verified Certificate fee. Eligible learners may receive up to 90{percent_sign} off' ' the Verified Certificate fee for a course.\nTo apply for financial assistance, enroll in the' ' audit track for a course that offers Verified Certificates, and then complete this application.' - ' Note that you must complete a separate application for each course you take.\n We will use this' + ' Note that you must complete a separate application for each course you take.\n We plan to use this' ' information to evaluate your application for financial assistance and to further develop our' ' financial assistance program.' ).format( @@ -1432,7 +1432,7 @@ FINANCIAL_ASSISTANCE_HEADER = _( FA_INCOME_LABEL = _('Annual Household Income') FA_REASON_FOR_APPLYING_LABEL = _( - 'Tell us about your current financial situation.' + 'Tell us about your current financial situation. Why do you need assistance?' ) FA_GOALS_LABEL = _( 'Tell us about your learning or professional goals. How will a Verified Certificate in' @@ -1568,11 +1568,11 @@ def financial_assistance_form(request): 'name': 'income', 'type': 'text', 'label': FA_INCOME_LABEL, - 'placeholder': _('income in USD ($)'), + 'placeholder': _('income in US Dollars ($)'), 'defaultValue': '', 'required': True, 'restrictions': {}, - 'instructions': _('Specify your annual income in USD.') + 'instructions': _('Specify your annual household income in US Dollars.') }, { 'name': 'reason_for_applying', @@ -1617,15 +1617,13 @@ def financial_assistance_form(request): 'placeholder': '', 'name': 'mktg-permission', 'label': _( - 'I allow edX to use the information provided in this application for edX marketing purposes.' + 'I allow edX to use the information provided in this application ' + '(except for financial information) for edX marketing purposes.' ), 'defaultValue': '', 'type': 'checkbox', 'required': False, - 'instructions': _( - 'Annual income and personal information such as email address will not be shared. ' - 'Financial information will not be used for marketing purposes.' - ), + 'instructions': '', 'restrictions': {} } ], diff --git a/lms/templates/financial-assistance/financial-assistance.html b/lms/templates/financial-assistance/financial-assistance.html index 04ef3efabb..c6582ec240 100644 --- a/lms/templates/financial-assistance/financial-assistance.html +++ b/lms/templates/financial-assistance/financial-assistance.html @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ from edxmako.shortcuts import marketing_link

${_("A Note to Learners")}

${_("Dear edX Learner,")}

${_("EdX Financial Assistance is a program we created to give learners in all financial circumstances a chance to earn a Verified Certificate upon successful completion of an edX course.")}

-

${_("If you are interested in working toward a Verified Certificate, but cannot afford to pay the fee, please apply now. Please note financial assistance is limited.")}

+

${_("If you are interested in working toward a Verified Certificate, but cannot afford to pay the fee, please apply now. Please note that financial assistance is limited and may not be awarded to all eligible candidates.")}

${_("In order to be eligible for edX Financial Assistance, you must demonstrate that paying the Verified Certificate fee would cause you economic hardship. To apply, you will be asked to answer a few questions about why you are applying and how the Verified Certificate will benefit you.")}

${_("If your application is approved, we'll give you instructions for verifying your identity on edx.org so you can start working toward completing your edX course.")}

${_("EdX is committed to making it possible for you to take high quality courses from leading institutions regardless of your financial situation, earn a Verified Certificate, and share your success with others.")}