diff --git a/lms/djangoapps/certificates/tests/test_webview_views.py b/lms/djangoapps/certificates/tests/test_webview_views.py
index d3055b5e70..624e0e4027 100644
--- a/lms/djangoapps/certificates/tests/test_webview_views.py
+++ b/lms/djangoapps/certificates/tests/test_webview_views.py
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ class CertificatesViewsTests(ModuleStoreTestCase, EventTrackingTestCase):
)
# Test an item from user info
self.assertIn(
- "{fullname}, you've earned a certificate!".format(fullname=self.user.profile.name),
+ "{fullname}, you earned a certificate!".format(fullname=self.user.profile.name),
response.content
)
# Test an item from social info
@@ -308,8 +308,8 @@ class CertificatesViewsTests(ModuleStoreTestCase, EventTrackingTestCase):
# Test an item from certificate/org info
self.assertIn(
"a course of study offered by {partner_short_name}, "
- "an online learning initiative of {partner_long_name} "
- "through {platform_name}.".format(
+ "an online learning initiative of "
+ "{partner_long_name}.".format(
partner_short_name=short_org_name,
partner_long_name=long_org_name,
platform_name='Test Microsite'
diff --git a/lms/djangoapps/certificates/views/webview.py b/lms/djangoapps/certificates/views/webview.py
index 3053dd154b..8a58d7e54c 100644
--- a/lms/djangoapps/certificates/views/webview.py
+++ b/lms/djangoapps/certificates/views/webview.py
@@ -56,24 +56,25 @@ def get_certificate_description(mode, certificate_type, platform_name):
certificate_type_description = None
if mode == 'honor':
# Translators: This text describes the 'Honor' course certificate type.
- certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} Certificate signifies that an {platform_name} "
- "learner has agreed to abide by {platform_name}'s honor code and "
- "completed all of the required tasks for this course under its "
+ certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} certificate signifies that a "
+ "learner has agreed to abide by the honor code established by {platform_name} "
+ "and has completed all of the required tasks for this course under its "
"guidelines.").format(cert_type=certificate_type,
platform_name=platform_name)
elif mode == 'verified':
# Translators: This text describes the 'ID Verified' course certificate type, which is a higher level of
# verification offered by edX. This type of verification is useful for professional education/certifications
- certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} Certificate signifies that an {platform_name} "
- "learner has agreed to abide by {platform_name}'s honor code and "
- "completed all of the required tasks for this course under its "
- "guidelines, as well as having their photo ID checked to verify "
- "their identity.").format(cert_type=certificate_type,
- platform_name=platform_name)
+ certificate_type_description = _("A {cert_type} certificate signifies that a "
+ "learner has agreed to abide by the honor code established by {platform_name} "
+ "and has completed all of the required tasks for this course under its "
+ "guidelines. A {cert_type} certificate also indicates that the "
+ "identity of the learner has been checked and "
+ "is valid.").format(cert_type=certificate_type,
+ platform_name=platform_name)
elif mode == 'xseries':
# Translators: This text describes the 'XSeries' course certificate type. An XSeries is a collection of
# courses related to each other in a meaningful way, such as a specific topic or theme, or even an organization
- certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} Certificate demonstrates a high level of "
+ certificate_type_description = _("An {cert_type} certificate demonstrates a high level of "
"achievement in a program of study, and includes verification of "
"the student's identity.").format(cert_type=certificate_type)
return certificate_type_description
@@ -121,7 +122,7 @@ def _update_certificate_context(context, user_certificate, platform_name):
# Translators: This text fragment appears after the student's name (displayed in a large font) on the certificate
# screen. The text describes the accomplishment represented by the certificate information displayed to the user
context['accomplishment_copy_description_full'] = _("successfully completed, received a passing grade, and was "
- "awarded a {platform_name} {certificate_type} "
+ "awarded this {platform_name} {certificate_type} "
"Certificate of Completion in ").format(
platform_name=platform_name,
certificate_type=context.get("certificate_type"))
@@ -131,12 +132,9 @@ def _update_certificate_context(context, user_certificate, platform_name):
context['certificate_type_description'] = certificate_type_description
# Translators: This text describes the purpose (and therefore, value) of a course certificate
- # 'verifying your identity' refers to the process for establishing the authenticity of the student
- context['certificate_info_description'] = _("{platform_name} acknowledges achievements through certificates, which "
- "are awarded for various activities {platform_name} students complete "
- "under the {platform_name} Honor Code. Some "
- "certificates require completing additional steps, such as "
- " verifying your identity.").format(
+ context['certificate_info_description'] = _("{platform_name} acknowledges achievements through "
+ "certificates, which are awarded for course activities "
+ "that {platform_name} students complete.").format(
platform_name=platform_name,
tos_url=context.get('company_tos_url'),
verified_cert_url=context.get('company_verified_certificate_url'))
@@ -203,10 +201,7 @@ def _update_context_with_basic_info(context, course_id, platform_name, configura
context['certificate_verify_urltext'] = _("Validate this certificate for yourself")
# Translators: This text describes (at a high level) the mission and charter the edX platform and organization
- context['company_about_description'] = _("{platform_name} offers interactive online classes and MOOCs from the "
- "world's best universities, including MIT, Harvard, Berkeley, University "
- "of Texas, and many others. {platform_name} is a non-profit online "
- "initiative created by founding partners Harvard and MIT.").format(
+ context['company_about_description'] = _("{platform_name} offers interactive online classes and MOOCs.").format(
platform_name=platform_name)
context['company_about_title'] = _("About {platform_name}").format(platform_name=platform_name)
@@ -238,15 +233,15 @@ def _update_course_context(request, context, course, platform_name):
if context['organization_long_name']:
# Translators: This text represents the description of course
context['accomplishment_copy_course_description'] = _('a course of study offered by {partner_short_name}, '
- 'an online learning initiative of {partner_long_name} '
- 'through {platform_name}.').format(
+ 'an online learning initiative of '
+ '{partner_long_name}.').format(
partner_short_name=context['organization_short_name'],
partner_long_name=context['organization_long_name'],
platform_name=platform_name)
else:
# Translators: This text represents the description of course
- context['accomplishment_copy_course_description'] = _('a course of study offered by {partner_short_name}, '
- 'through {platform_name}.').format(
+ context['accomplishment_copy_course_description'] = _('a course of study offered by '
+ '{partner_short_name}.').format(
partner_short_name=context['organization_short_name'],
platform_name=platform_name)
@@ -268,7 +263,7 @@ def _update_social_context(request, context, course, user, user_certificate, pla
context['twitter_share_enabled'] = share_settings.get('CERTIFICATE_TWITTER', False)
context['twitter_share_text'] = share_settings.get(
'CERTIFICATE_TWITTER_TEXT',
- _("I completed a course on {platform_name}. Take a look at my certificate.").format(
+ _("I completed a course at {platform_name}. Take a look at my certificate.").format(
platform_name=platform_name
)
)
@@ -314,13 +309,13 @@ def _update_context_with_user_info(context, user, user_certificate):
user_name=user_fullname
)
# Translators: This line is displayed to a user who has completed a course and achieved a certification
- context['accomplishment_banner_opening'] = _("{fullname}, you've earned a certificate!").format(
+ context['accomplishment_banner_opening'] = _("{fullname}, you earned a certificate!").format(
fullname=user_fullname
)
# Translators: This line congratulates the user and instructs them to share their accomplishment on social networks
- context['accomplishment_banner_congrats'] = _("Congratulations! This page summarizes all of the details of what "
- "you've accomplished. Show it off to family, friends, and colleagues "
+ context['accomplishment_banner_congrats'] = _("Congratulations! This page summarizes what "
+ "you accomplished. Show it off to family, friends, and colleagues "
"in your social and professional networks.")
# Translators: This line leads the reader to understand more about the certificate that a student has been awarded
@@ -415,7 +410,6 @@ def _update_microsite_context(context, configuration):
_update_certificate_context() call above. For example the
'company_about_description' talks about edX, which we most likely
do not want to keep in a microsite
-
So we need to re-apply any configuration/content that
we are sourcing from the database. This is somewhat duplicative of
the code at the beginning of this method, but we