From 001da52af6d2b3fee5ae45fb4bd19f7fea28c507 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andy Armstrong <andya@edx.org>
Date: Mon, 27 Apr 2015 14:58:30 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Address Sylvia's doc feedback

---
 .../test/acceptance/tests/lms/test_learner_profile.py  |  4 ++--
 .../student_account/views/account_settings_factory.js  | 10 ++++------
 .../student_profile/views/learner_profile_factory.js   |  4 +---
 3 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/common/test/acceptance/tests/lms/test_learner_profile.py b/common/test/acceptance/tests/lms/test_learner_profile.py
index 226ddfe87c..73ae7e3f42 100644
--- a/common/test/acceptance/tests/lms/test_learner_profile.py
+++ b/common/test/acceptance/tests/lms/test_learner_profile.py
@@ -387,8 +387,8 @@ class OwnLearnerProfilePageTest(LearnerProfileTestMixin, WebAppTest):
         Then `about me` field mode should be `edit`
         """
         placeholder_value = (
-            "Tell other edX learners a little about yourself: where you live, what your interests are, "
-            "why you're taking courses on edX, or what you hope to learn."
+            "Tell other learners a little about yourself: where you live, what your interests are, "
+            "why you're taking courses, or what you hope to learn."
         )
 
         username, user_id = self.log_in_as_unique_user()
diff --git a/lms/static/js/student_account/views/account_settings_factory.js b/lms/static/js/student_account/views/account_settings_factory.js
index 3194680dc8..07daa25174 100644
--- a/lms/static/js/student_account/views/account_settings_factory.js
+++ b/lms/static/js/student_account/views/account_settings_factory.js
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
                                 title: gettext('Username'),
                                 valueAttribute: 'username',
                                 helpMessage: interpolate_text(
-                                    gettext('The name that identifies you on the {platform_name} site. You cannot change your username.'), {platform_name: platformName}
+                                    gettext('The name that identifies you throughout {platform_name}. You cannot change your username.'), {platform_name: platformName}
                                 )
                             })
                         },
@@ -39,9 +39,7 @@
                                 model: userAccountModel,
                                 title: gettext('Full Name'),
                                 valueAttribute: 'name',
-                                helpMessage: interpolate_text(
-                                    gettext('The name that appears on your {platform_name} certificates. Other learners never see your full name.'), {platform_name: platformName}
-                                )
+                                helpMessage: gettext('The name that appears on your certificates. Other learners never see your full name.')
                             })
                         },
                         {
@@ -50,7 +48,7 @@
                                 title: gettext('Email Address'),
                                 valueAttribute: 'email',
                                 helpMessage: interpolate_text(
-                                    gettext('The email address you use to sign in to {platform_name}. Communications from {platform_name} and your courses are sent to this address.'), {platform_name: platformName}
+                                    gettext('The email address you use to sign in. Communications from {platform_name} and your courses are sent to this address.'), {platform_name: platformName}
                                 )
                             })
                         },
@@ -74,7 +72,7 @@
                                 required: true,
                                 refreshPageOnSave: true,
                                 helpMessage: interpolate_text(
-                                    gettext('The language used for the {platform_name} site. The site is currently available in a limited number of languages.'), {platform_name: platformName}
+                                    gettext('The language used throughout this site. This site is currently available in a limited number of languages.'), {platform_name: platformName}
                                 ),
                                 options: fieldsData.language.options
                             })
diff --git a/lms/static/js/student_profile/views/learner_profile_factory.js b/lms/static/js/student_profile/views/learner_profile_factory.js
index febc935a61..a66dc3f45e 100644
--- a/lms/static/js/student_profile/views/learner_profile_factory.js
+++ b/lms/static/js/student_profile/views/learner_profile_factory.js
@@ -103,9 +103,7 @@
                     editable: editable,
                     showMessages: false,
                     title: gettext('About me'),
-                    placeholderValue: interpolate_text(
-                        gettext("Tell other {platform_name} learners a little about yourself: where you live, what your interests are, why you're taking courses on {platform_name}, or what you hope to learn."), {platform_name: options.platform_name}
-                    ),
+                    placeholderValue: gettext("Tell other learners a little about yourself: where you live, what your interests are, why you're taking courses, or what you hope to learn."),
                     valueAttribute: "bio",
                     helpMessage: ''
                 })